Happy end of February, everybody! Got ourselves an extra day of it though. Still feels like a novelty, even after all these years.
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For my post this week, I’ve skipped ahead a few paragraphs from last time. You can find previous excerpts here. Devorah and her mentor Kazimir have been asked to help the angels capture the demon Thaumiel. Kaz shows her the website for an ecclesiastical conference happening soon in their city; she reads the guest of honor list and asks if that wouldn’t attract other demons as well. Kaz answers:
“That’s where my familiarity with him comes in. I’ve tracked him over four continents. He’ll stake his claim on this and everybody else will clear out. He’s a lieutenant colonel, high enough to make more than half of hell obey him and the others have different preferences. But we’re only going to get one shot at him and there are potential issues that need to get resolved.”
He pushed the laptop at me, grabbed his phone off the bedside table and started pacing. I plugged the cooling pad into the computer. It beat me how fire-aligned demons like Kazimir didn’t fry their electronics.
I guess that’s part of being a demon! Devorah is the lowest level of rank in the demon hierarchy and Kaz is only 2 levels above that – what do you think their chances are of capturing a lieutenant colonel? Any better if they get some help? I bet you can guess!
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Lol. A demon attending an ecclesiastic conference.
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heehee! They’re not exactly going to attend … that’ll be clear later. Nice to see you, Ed!
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I’m with Ed, I love the irony of this! But, yeah, they’re definitely gonna need some serious help, I think!
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Hi Monica 🙂 Maybe I should find a way to have them crash the conference!
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Great detail about the cooling pad. And I’d love to know how this conference is going to go!
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Thanks. Everything’s gonna go according to plan *wink*
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Not shy here but how the heck do they expect to trap and destroy the bad guy? Maybe tie him up and force him to watch Gilligan’s Island-every season it ran! That might do the trick. Good writing, my friend. Just having a wee bit of fun here.
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Lololol! They have something else in mind but I think your idea is better! Next time I’m stuck I’ll ask you for ideas! 🙂
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Lots of nice little details! Great snippet.
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I suspect “potential issues’ is a euphemism for what is about to occur…
I am looking forward to watching things go awry!!!
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I enjoyed the combination of “modern” electronics and fiery demons!
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Things are starting to heat up and not only on the laptop. Great sneak peek!
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If he’s that powerful, I really don’t see how it will be easy to bring him down. And I wonder if they’ll be able to prevent whatever his plans for that conference are…
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I especially like how you merge modern technology with something as ancient as angels and demons. 🙂
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I like your mix of humor in with the problem. Yes! Send them help!
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Great last line! I can’t believe fire-aligned demons don’t make electronic gizmos blow up.
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Yup, sounds like they’re going to have their hands full. Love that last line, by the way. 😉
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